i attempted essay on "Can we prevent 3rd world war".
i wrote outline (only points) of almost 2 pages.
then the length of the essay was 60 pages.(unexpectedly)
but i heard of many candidates who have written only 35 pages and got 65 marks.
as far as my experience is concerned: ,essay is all about howz ur introduction specially theme statement,introduction and starters of each paragraph .In addition to it,how many aspects of a topic u cover in ur essay.
last time i didnt follow any rule n got 40 marks.

thanx alot.

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You said a lot depend on how is introduction...can you share your opinion and experience about what to write in intro, especially the theme statement, how long it should be?

Regards,

A/S MoBushra,
I have opted stats, can u plz tell me which topic is more impotant, waisay i m done with the whole course, but for revision i want some guidence that which topic needs more emphasis.

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First of all it is completely astonish for me. how anyone can write 65 or 35 pages in essay paper. Particularly how can ur eng structure remain accurate rest of the pages? Second tHing outline and theme only dosnt matter in essay. ur outline,intro, ur examples in perfect eng matter alot in achieving gud marks in essay paper. Moreover, i think pages dont matter in css ur english is matter like structure, less gram mistakes, execution of ur examples with the references of essay topic like how much u hav Justified urself in convincing examiner. ur Influential style supports u to get gud marks which i leanrt 4rm my teachers Becuase examiner always doesnt give enuf marks in eng and essay papers.

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My DMC

Essay 47
Eng Comp 45
G.K (67+47+42)=156
Islamiat 61

Geography 71+61=132
Isl. History 71+59=130
Journalism 74
Int. Law 66

Written 711
Viva 140
Total 851
Merit No. 54

The only limits in our life are those we impose on ourselves.

Essay 64
precise & comp 59
current affairs 35
everyday sceince 78
pakistan affairs 60
islamiyat 71

sociology 36
journalism 83
british history 70
arabic 71

total: 627

interview score: 183

grand total 810

merit position 182

i wrote 7 pages on essay " can third world war be averted?" length of the essay is not important only ur approach should be argumantative.

@ Arif Rao
my merit # 49
On behalf of one of my freinds,i want u people to share ur opinions....if someone wants to improve one's group bt is going to be allocated in this batch.What do u think if one shoud go for 2nd attempt in 2010 or wait uptil the cmpletion of CTP & STP.Do suggest while keeping all factors in mind.

@amna
well very good score in some ppaers but not in some but still ur position is not that much bad as mine..... will u scure ur place in the four groups of ur choice.... as u ve mentioned only 4 in the preffernce forms?

interw marks are vvvvvvv good.

wish u all the best.....


My DMS.
well i was not in the position to share my DMC BCZ mujy khud buht afsos ho raha ta..... but khair now i think that i have to share with ma friends.

Essay 47

comp 48

pak aff 37

currnt aff 37

ED science 55

islamiat 47

US history 55

pol scince 102

C.law 44

muslim law 60

pushto 68

total written 600..... hurrrraaaaahh

viva 140

total 740.............thats all the sad story.

i was expecting highest marks in my optional papers.... but now after analyzing i came to the conclusion that the approach i adopted in written part was not good... esp this year...

still i think every thing is from the side of Allah... ve are bound to work hard and try again and again the result will be good in the end.

ur friend

ISLAH

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if u want to revise the course,then use the books of Sher M Chaudary.but focus on distributions and tests more than other topics.
prepare its theoratical part as well bcz numerical questions r sometimes much lengthy and one can get good marks in theory as well

wish u best of luck


u were astonished ,but i am shocked that one cant write 35 pages in essay papers.the lenght of essay is their requirement as well.
ya pages dont matter.i told that candidates have written 35pages and scored between 60-65.
as well as material(data ,examples etc) is concerned,even one cant write a single page without material.
so i didnt say that material does not matter.if u read my earlier msgs,i wrote
a) there was neither a single grammetical nor spelling mistake in my paper.
b)usage of idioms,phrases,adjectives and technical words according to the nature of essay was perfect.
c) the aspects /topic u r covering matters a lot. i included from social to economic all factors.

in both attempts ,i used the above mentioned techniques even almost same material.i attempted nuclear war in first and 3rd world war in 2nd attempt.
but this time,i focused on theme statement and structure of essay and got 68 marks .(last time 27).so there is a clear comparison in front of u