Zaberdust, A good one. It speaks the very Topic.

“Prosperity makes friends, adversity tries them”

It is a universal truth that when one has success, power, money and everything so everyone tries to make friendship and maintain relationships but when one has none of the above things everyone leaves him. As Adolf Hitler says that keep on working hard regardless of result when you are successful everyone follow you but when you in dark your own shadow will leave you.

In our daily life, we usually see that when any person gets success we make friendship with him because we have certain interests but when he comes in hot water we usually ignore him. Thomas Hobbes says that man by nature is selfish.

Saddam Hussain former despotic ruler of Iraq, when he was under the patronage of America he enjoyed a lot even his rival country Iran recognized him but when he came in adversity his own generals left him in the lurch.

The recent Arab Spring, which was occurred in Tunisia, Libya, Egypt. When their leaders were prosperous every country tried to make friendship with them but once they came in adversity no one helped them.

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K.Ali

It was quite good attempt, but you have committed mistakes in punctuating the sentences correctly. Do check it. Another thing which needs attention is grammar. You have made such mistakes in your grammar as: 'Saddam Hussain former despotic ruler of Iraq, when he was under the patronage of America'. This sentence should be written as: "When the former despotic ruler, saddam hussain, was under patronage of America". Similarly, few other sentences like this one need to be corrected.

Regards

you yourself has lighted the theme very well. Every one has its own style and it does'nt mean he or she has to write acutely according to your own assessnent. If you really go through to this particular expansion then Xuhaib rightly explained it ,focusing man is in jail'' vice versa.secondly, one proverb has multi-themes and these implied to life .so each theme is correct if it is proved logically and rationally.And point out where xuhaib has not use logic because your judgement is flawed but i tend to agree with your stance ''expansion should be based on present '' ,so if there are mistakes ,highlight them. Thirdly ,please write expansion on the following theme so one can get what you are trying to convey!!!



"ab to ghabra ke be khty hn mer jaen
mr ke be chain na pya to kider jae hum

1-contentment

2-concept of hell and heaven

3.envy ..psycho analysis

many more theme this provetb contain but one has to provr one with solid arguments!!

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"Wa tu izzu man-ta shaa, wa tu zillu man-ta shaa"

Thanks a lot. Quite well explanation. Keep on helping.

Quite well. Try to write exact words of Quotation.

You have given quite good examples and reasons but you didn't conclude it well.

You could give a message regarding topic in the last of Expansion.

Overall, Good One.

please evaluate,mark & guide!!

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Hey Life,I'm my own cheer leader so u can't take advantage of homeground..got it u moron??? Huh ~sheryl Almazari~

Quite well! Good use of vocabulary.

You could give good examples.

Overall, more than 10 for this one.

And, Did you read expansion of mine on yesterday's topic, CALL NO MAN..........?

understanding & examples are relevant & too the point.

instead of magical world you could use something more negative.. just a thought..

overall piece depicts your grasp & application of knowledge
something that i often ignores
good one

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Hey Life,I'm my own cheer leader so u can't take advantage of homeground..got it u moron??? Huh ~sheryl Almazari~

Dear, Friends! Do write on it.

A thing of beauty is joy for ever. John Keats.