Correct the mistakes again.

here is query about expansions that can we use poetry of other languages as it is??

Prefer not to use poetry of other languages, but if indispensible, give its English translation as well..

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"So my birth was the first of all my misfortunes". (Jean Jacques Rosseou)

Goodwill can be earned by many acts, it can be lost by one

Goowill means the identity and status of man in the world.For him, it is one of the most valueable assets he can have on earth.However, it cannot be earned easily.A man has to give his best shot every single time to earn just a bit of it.It is also one of the most vulnerable assets a man can have.A bad fish can spoil the whole pond.Similarly, a single act of shame and dishonour can shake the whole foundation of man's relationships or business.A restaurant hire the best chefs in the town to develope its identity with unique taste.It moves heaven and earth to maintain the taste but a single mismanaged serving affects the identitiy of the whole resturant adversly along with it's custommer retention rate.Similar is the case with relationships.An act of suspicion can put a question on the purity of a longterm realtionship.it can even endager it's very existance.This maxim has it's implications even before the advent of this world.Satan was initially an angle and structured only for obedience but his single act of denial to bow before adam multiplied his life long obendience with zero.It cost him his expulsion from the heaven and became a curse for humanity.In addition, importance of goodwill vary from person to person with theri age and profession.A school going student may not mind to pocket insult for not doing home work.While,a university student, by doing so, may risk entering into the bad books of his teacher along with loosing marks.But no matter how much the degree of imortance varies,it goes with out saying that honour and status in the society does hold value for everyone. However, attitude of some nations towards it is move sensitive than others.For example,in JAPAN,CEOs put their heart and soul into attaining every target set,to maintaine their goodwill.This is because they prefer to committ suicide than failing to achive the goal, putting a blot on their status.For them, servival without money is possible but without goodwill is not possible.That is why THEY PREFER TO DIE ON THEIR FEET THEN TO LIVE ON THEIR KNEES.It seems like Dolores Ibarruri has said it for japanese.It is true that to err is human but the creator has also provided man with a complete code of life and a book of instrutions in terms of the Holly QURAN and Sunnah.It has all the guidance to solve the problems of wordly life, so that man could avoid even the tiniest wrong-doings to cast into shadow his hard earned goodwill.

please seniors check my composition

The quotation tells us that a child possesses all those faculties which a grown up man has. The qualities shown by a child are often indications of what the child is going to be when he grows up.
The habits and traits of a child develop as he grows up. bringing up a child in the ways of honesty and uprightness will make him an honest man. While a child brought up in surroundings that encourage filthy habits will most probably retain those habits throughout his life. the early training of a child is, therefore, a matter of supreme importance.
All the qualities physical, mental, and spiritual will be found in the grown up man may be found in germ in the child. As Milton says:
"The childhood shows the man
As morning shows the day."
The truth of the statement is borne out by the lives of many men and women who have left a name behind them. It is said of Michenangelo, the famous sculptor and painter, that when he was a child he used to make drawings on the paint-pots, easel, stool, and other such things belonging to an old painter. that old painter said, "That boy will beat me one day." The words of the old man came true and Michelangelo became one of the greatest artists of the world. the childhood of Ruskin, Tennyson, Miss Florence Nightingale and others indicated the lines of their development.
Therefore, childhood may be regarded as the index of adolescence and youth. Let us help to develop in children those qualities which make good citizens and upright men; for the child of today is the man of tomorrow!
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SENIORS PLEASE CORRECT WHERE I AM WRONG.

Peace is the need of man's character. All the good faith people's(NO NEED OF APOSTROPHE) are the voters of peace. But peace is directly related to war and both the terms refers(REFER) to the balance of power. The exact meaning of the phrase is, if one want a consistant and thorough peace, one must be strong and proficient enough to secure it by all time ready to give devestating defeat to its enemy. As Aristotle says : we make wars that we may live in peace.
An appropriate example is the Munich Aggrement ,which depict that hardly an ink(AN ink?) of an aggrement had dried, hitler(Hitler) wage(d) a war against britain(British). And britain suffer becuse of her neglegence.Freedom can only be maintained by guarding it properly, just as eternal vigilance is the price of liberty.
Country's peace can only be secure(d) by thinking about war at the time of peace.Because strong , powerfull and commendable image of a country will let down the ill plans of an enemies. As Johan.F.Kennedy saysQUOTATION MARK) It is an unfortunate fact that we can secure peace only by preparing for wars. American leaders embosed these words and made all efforts to get strong hold on the world and their influence get them on a position of super power. American success is the prime example of the above saying. It can be concluded that peace belong to those only,who secure it by the guards of war.

Your ideas ARE MESSED UP.Put them at suitable place. Improve your structures,,,,,,

The nearer the church farther from God:
since its birth, man ever seems to be struggled for calm and feeling of satisfection, although through varying standards and means. Church is perceived as peaceful place but the growing materialism has made distinguishing role on the part of definition/status of church and God as well. it also influenced by the scientific advancements like the existence of God before and after big-bang theory may affect negatively but equally likely possible to use globalization positively like to draw global attention by the Vatican pope Benidict.
this mode of conduct create ambiguity between church and God because followers/individuals due/extra ordinary consideration to the physical existence rather than abstract one.moreover increasing superfeciality further made God's concept vague by establishing easily monoplated church, not God! that's how the nearer the church, people use religion as shelter, not to gain genuine mercy by liking to God

Dear, you should first learn how to write an essay first.. It demands coherence, clarity, brevity and much more.. Secondly, it is an expansion or a short essay, it has other specific features of its own as well.. I suggest you to have a look at the earlier posts by our senior members, and also bother to look at 'How to expand a given statement', explained by many senior members on the forum..
Thanks..

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"So my birth was the first of all my misfortunes". (Jean Jacques Rosseou)

after a gap of three years i am going to write anything....if anybody can come up and evaluate me writing and point out my weakness as far as
understanding of the topic and written expression is concerned
but one thing is far sure i cant write anymore...it took me almost an hour and half to write down these lines ,,still ideas are jumbled up and i cant express what i really want to say....i cannot write simply and need some serious help

The sun rises and sets,the seasons come and go but the values remained constant.The north star was,still is and will be the most generous quiet friend to all navigators.similarly there were men.there are and there will be men taking their ships pleasantly to the harbor and will be called as ablest.To face the wind was really difficult initially because the winds dominated.losing was not the option so the winds had to be defeated.the weapons in the armory were strong will power. determination to the cause and motivation to set an example higher as was set by the north star.the heavy odds were faced and used to own advantage using all the weapons one by one.there were among these who even ordered to burn their boats in order to gain success.
and that's what exactly happened 14 hundred years ago and kept on happening throughout the ages.
same can happen today we have sufficient resources
let i can i will be our motto and we must know that when we can become desperately honest with ourselves nothing can stop us becoming the ablest .
"i am the captain of my own ship
i am the master of my own fate"

‘Sweet are the uses of adversity’

Adversity means misery, trouble, difficulty or any other unfavourable situation. Everyone wants to live a smooth and a luxurious life. Nobody wants to face hardships in life. but without being exposed to bitter realities of life, if someone want to get success , it’s just a day dreaming.

life is not a bed of roses, no one can achieve success without facing difficulties. adversities of life eventually give us sweet fruits. World history tells us that no one got success without bearing harsh and adverse circumstances. Prophet Mohammad(PBUH) faced innumerable problems when he started preaching Islam and his followers are still struggling. but they have got the sweet uses of these adversities. Today Islam is the second largest religion of the world. Columbus faced an unknown wild ocean and then he discovered America. Thomas Edison failed many times while inventing light bulb but he didn’t give up. at the end he got success.

Personality grooms when one faces the challenges of the world. if someone got everything without any effort he/she can’t survive in this competitive world. adversity is blessing in disguise. only those people acquire confidence and moral strength who combat with adversities.