Originally Posted by safeer khan

Not bad for 20 minutes' effort. But you have missed some important things in hurry.

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Originally Posted by waqarabbasi

I kept the introduction short on purpose, practicing two essays in 3 hours.

when there will be one essay I will write the longer introduction.

I perceived the roads as intangible plans and policies; you have taken it differently and it creates no issue. everyone has the different approach.

regarding your essay, it is good.
[D] Policy implications of the idea:

1- construction of new road networks
2- maintenance of the existing roads
, they are not attractive , try to use some solid ideas.

are you practicing 2 essays in 3 hours?

Originally Posted by safeer khan

Title:
It is not wealth that creates roads but it is the roads that leads to the creation of wealth.


Thesis statement:

A Road provides the foundation for the overall prosperity of nations.

Outline:

Introduction:


[A] The misperception - wealth builds roads:

[B] The reality - roads create wealth:

[C] Roads pave the way towards wealth by:

1- increasing connectivity
---1.1- within a city and a country-
---1.2- between countries and regions-
2- decreasing the time required to travel
3- offering employment opportunities
---3.1- during construction-
---3.2- after completion-
4- decreasing transportation costs
---4.1- for the passengers-
---4.2- for the goods-
5- providing access to
---5.1- the markets-
---5.2- the schools-
---5.3- the hospitals-
6- bringing more people in the economic sphere
7- easing the frustrations of traffic jams

[D] Policy implications of the idea:

1- construction of new road networks
2- maintenance of the existing roads

Conclusion:


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Originally Posted by safeer khan

Not now. I will work on that in the last three days.

Ajkal working on optionals and pet questions because I have crammed too little.

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Originally Posted by waqarabbasi

good and what about writing practice; can you manage 4 questions easily?

i have no problem in any other subject except maths and writing practice.

Originally Posted by ursula

Your essay is good and vocab is also nice but you have a profound problem of using correct punctuation.
one of the thing that i missed alot is nimiety of optimism I guess so! moreover some of the points that need clarification

If snow flakes create avalanche to descend down than who is progenitor of ISIS,you can mention socioeconomic disparities or radical ideaology in reaction to hegemony of west or so on

Same problem here as well,
Dont you think point is mere repetition


Some excellent points that make your essay distinctive from others are

Tick it!

Originally Posted by safeer khan

I can manage four questions only if I write four sides for one question. I am not writing at all although I have taki taken monk tests and done satisfactorily.

My weak areas are :
Pair of words etc of paper 2.
Mcqs of pak affairs and current affairs.
General Science portion, (maths' part is my strongest)
Typical questions of islamiat
History of USA
Governance and public policy.

Allah izzat rakh ly bs.



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Originally Posted by Tahir Nabi

No snowflake in an Avalanche ever feels responsible
1.Thesis Statement
2.Introduction
3.Elucidation of this Philosophical thought cognitively; coined by Great French enlightenist: Voltaire
4.Retrospection of History; where this realm had been implemented.
I.Fall of Empires: Roman, Abbasid and Ottoman.
II.Colonization by Imperialist states; resulting mass havocs and massacres.
III.French Revolution: From a peaceful demand of rights to bloodsheded Avalanche (Chaos).
IV.Nazi’s Barbarism and Mussolini’s Fascism; who were responsible for that human catastrophe: either both nations or both Psychopath Duo (Hitler and Mussolini).
5.Contemporary Epitomes of this Philosophical notion.
I.Middle East’s Arab Spring: Unleashed chaos and Destruction in the Region.
II.Global warming: A monstrous threat unconsciously created by us.
III.USA’s creation of Afghan Mujahedeen; an exiguous sparking ignites blaze of terrorism, extremism and fundamentalism.
IV.Who is responsible for the creation of Frankenstein monster aka ISIS; no one feels responsible.
V.Socio-political and economic catastrophe in African, Arab and South Asian World; Responsibility of UNO or G20s?
VI.Conundrum of Syrian Avalanche: which include mass killing, human migration and destruction of a state.
6.Lethargy of our Society on the societal embarrassing issues, and growing societal lassitude at human’s rights violation.
I.Rampant growing Women’s abuse: Rape, Honour Killing, Acid Attacks, gender discrimination and Sexual harassment. Role of Men?
II.Extensive increase in Inter-faith and Inter-sect Intolerance, responsibility of State and Society?
III.Religious Extremism, Fundamentalism; Role of Ulemas.
IV.Apathetic attitude of masses in Sindh and Baluchistan towards their corrupt, impotent and inefficient government.
V.Pakistan’s national mantra of Cross-roads from 67 years and cauldron of various crises; does anyone take responsibility?
7. Pragmatic way to stop the disastrous Avalanche from falling, and creating snowflake’s awareness of responsibility.
I.Locke, Rousseau and Voltaire Philosophical anticipation to be cautious from this Avalanche.
II.Curbing the causes which leads to Fall the Avalanche i.e. Human rights violation, Imperialism, hegemonic designs by states, Proxies and Societal issues.
III.Responsibility of global forums: UNO, WTO, WHO, SAARC, SCO, CW, G20s.
IV.Individual own moral responsibility; views of Kantian and Mills Ethics.
V.Promotion of Peace, harmony, tolerance by states, scholars and religious lords.
VI.Call for collective responsibility for spatial issues by UNO.
8.Critical Analysis


If we leap into nimiety of historical events, there is a vivid visualization of certain destruction, change, dormant stability or a cauldron of crisis; assuredly, there would be an explicit abundance of reasons, causes and raison deter of aforementioned realms. Furthermore, there would be also embarkation of sensual, ethical or actual responsibility of these phenomena. Consequently, this will create some distinct responses; one would refuse to take this responsibility or other will ask for shared responsibility. Contrary to that, there will be some, who will be unaware of any created mesh, and eventually will say ‘I am not responsible for this Avalanche-typo challenge or menace’.

Francois-Marie Arouet aka Voltaire, a renowned French thinker, enlightenist and propagator of Free speech during French enlightenment, anticipated this notion prudently during the worst humanitarian crisis in French tyrant monarchy. Predicting a havoc due to rising anguish attitude and furiousness of masses, Voltaire said ‘No snowflake in an Avalanche ever feels responsible’. Here Voltaire cautioned the authoritarians to fear from that incoming destructible phase; and warned that for this unleashed anguish no one will take responsibility.

Retrospection of History gives vehement view of Voltaire’s philosophical anticipation. There were many glorious and stupendous empires, whose territorial range touched other continents. Additionally, their cultural, political and religious colours reached in every nook and corner of the world. However, when these empires lost moral, political and social support due to their imperialistic and oligarchic policies; their prestigious Olympus fallen destructively into deep history of lessons. Ironically these great empires were Roman, Abbasid and Ottoman. Moreover, colonizer and imperialist state showed same atrocities and monstrosities of masses in the African, Australian, North American and South-Asian countries; and they were unaware or being apathetic of what they had manifested: a bloody Avalanche.

Originally Posted by musmanhussain

If there are two short essay in the paper then what should be the length of each essay.
Please someone highlight this issue.And also guide regarding outline length.