Originally Posted by Aimen khakwani

1-Introduction.

2- Facts:- A published global survey that lists Pakistan as the third worst country in the world for women.

3- Problems faced by women of Pakistan
• Domestic violence.
• Dowry abuse.
• Acid throwing.
• Head and eye brow shaving
• Vani.
• Watta Satta.
• Marriage with Quran.
• Sexual harassment.

4- Factors behind the Poor status of women In Pakistan:-

 Economic Causes :-
• Women Economic dependence on man.
• Limited access to Cash and credit.
• Limited access to education and training for women.
• Limited openings to employment in formal and informal sector.

 Political Causes;-
• Lack of implementation of laws.
• Inadequate representation of women in Politics.
• Insensitive treatment by Police and Judiciary.

 Socio Cultural Factors:-
• Pakistan a Patriarchal society.
• Illiteracy.
• Poverty.
• Misrepresentation of Islamic teachings. (belief in the inherent superiority of males.)
• Heinous Cultural practices
 Effects of the Poor status of women in Pakistan :-
• Poor economic development of the country.
• Lack of trust on Government.
• Social unrest.
• Feeling of deprivation among women.

 Strategies to bring the change in the condition of women ;-

• Education.
• Role of government.
• Media.
• Role of religious leaders.
• International community.

 Conclusion

Introduction:-

In modern societies, man and woman both(the both man and women) are evaluated and entertained by equal rights. They work together for the betterment of their societies. They(; and" connect the previous sentence with the next one by semi colon and put and after it so that sentence looks more better) play an eminent role in the development of the country. But( remove but) unfortunately, women in Pakistan live in a(that) world which is structured by strict religious, family and tribal customs. They are subjected to discrimination on a daily basis. They face various forms of violence in every aspect of life. In fact, the chief factor behind the brutality against women in Pakistan is the economic dependence of woman on man. Furthermore, there are also some economic, political, socio-cultural, religious factors which make the women subservient to men in Pakistan. Moreover, Pakistan usually operates under rigid patriarchal system where women are compelled to work under the dominance of men. These factors not only affect the state of mind of woman but also hinder the economic development of the country. However,(crying need for the hour is that) Government machinery should focus on the education of women to enhance the status of women in Pakistan. Pakistan cannot become a prosperous country in the world if half portion of the population(until half of the portion of Population)i.e women not given their due share.

Originally Posted by haroon malik

kindly seniors and all members chk my essay outline and introduction and provide recommendatiosn..thnks
1. Power of media in 21st century
2. Powerful weapon of the modern world.
3. Backbone of social, political and cultural changes.
4. Commendable role in war on terror
5. Constitutional provisions and guarantees.
6. Constituents of freedom of press.
7. Functions of media/ Contribution of strong media towards society:
 Education for the masses
 Awareness about world scenario, fundamental rights and duties.
 Opinion formation related to social, political, economic & religious issues
 Companies Advertisement and Campaign
 Ensures public participation in government's policies.
 Freedom of expression
 Promotion of democracy by inculcating political awareness in masses.
 Instrumental in promoting national integration
 A great source of entertainment

8. Factors contributing to the emergence of a vibrant media
 Sustained struggle by journalistic community.
 Vehement support of civil society.
 Sound financial position of media groups.
 Tremendous advancements in technological sphere

9. Unjustified use of power by media.
 Sentimental approach on sensitive issues
 Preference to commercial interests over national ones.
 Partisan role of media houses
 Making wedge between Islam and the west wide

10. Freedom of press in Pakistan
 Semi-independent press owing to punctuated democracy
 Role of military regimes from Ayub Khan to Zia Ul Haq
11. Current scenario in Pakistan over the last decade
 PEMRA 2001...martial law regime 2001
 Mushroom growth of private TV channels
 Role of media in promulgation of emergency...3rd November 2007
 PRO, under emergency

12. Challenges / hurdles before Pakistan's media

 Illiterate population...Lack of interest/ awareness
 Political instability
 Indifferent attitude of the masses towards the policies of the government.
 Shortage of funds/ resources
 Political interference

13. Suggestions for desirable use of power of media.
 A well thought out self made code of conduct by media organizations
 Enhanced role of the editorship
 Recruitment of only properly trained journalists
 Ethics of journalism/ press to be followed.
 Strive for national integration
 Impartial / unbiased analysis
 Avoid exaggeration
 Avoid obscenity / vulgarity
 Depiction of Pakistan's true culture and history
 Promotion of social, ethical and moral values
 Projection of softer image of government's policies
 Maintenance of public confidence
 Promotion of Quaid's vision and ideology of Pakistan
Napoleon said:”Even a single newspaper is stronger than thousand of guns” The twentieth century is the dawn of media. Basically there are two types of media, Electronic Media and Print Media. Both have their own areas of exercise. Before the monopoly of electronic media, print media had the same monopoly which it has lost now. Newspapers had been around for a long time, but cannot deliver as powerful a message as photography, radio and film. With photography, people finally got to see what others across the world looked like. With few means of communication, everyone assumed the rest of the world was all the same. In Electronic Media there are different types like Television, Radio, VCR, Tape Recorder and the Internet. Media enjoys a tremendous power in modern world and its role in the dispensation of its duties largely remains admirable. Sustained struggle by journalistic community, financial position of media groups, tremendous advancements in technological sphere, support for civil society, political analysis, economic debate, social awareness and religious clarification build its importance multifold. Media become custodian(guardian) of fundamental human right, Influential in policy making process by governmental authorities, promotion of democracy by inculcating political awareness in masses, commendable role in war on terror, instrumental in promoting national integration, great source of entertainment.+(Suggestion) A well thought out self made code of conduct by media organizations, enhanced role of the editorship, recruitment of only properly trained journalists would make it more powerful. Media is regarded as the most powerful weapon of 21st century. It is often said that world has become a global village. It is power of media that has shrunk the distances between different parts of the world

Originally Posted by Ahmed Faisal

Your writing style is good, but I have a little suggestion for you. After a cursory glance I observed that your Introduction does not truly represent your outline. Secondly, you need to work on your punctuations, transitional words and sentence structure.
Good Attempt...

Originally Posted by Ahmed Faisal

Your writing style is good, but I have a little suggestion for you. After a cursory glance I observed that your Introduction does not truly represent your outline. Secondly, you need to work on your punctuations, transitional words and sentence structure.
Good Attempt...

Originally Posted by isha saeed

All respected members, especially aimen khakwani, Ahmed faisal, nosheen bukhari, sidra ameen, isha saeed are highly requested to check my attempt and to point out my mistakes. Your sincere efforts to highlight my shortcomings and give me useful suggestions are helping me to improve myself more than my expectations.

Energy crisis in Pakistan..

1-Introduction
a. Meaning of energy
b. Its relationship with progress of a country
c, Energy crisis in Pakistan

2-Energy crisis in Pakistan (present situation)
a. Acute shortage of energy
b. Low generation of electricity
c. Shortage of gas
d. Hike in oil prices
c. wide gape between supply and demand

3-Reasons of energy crisis
a. Lack of political will
b. Poor management of resources
c. Over-reliance upon renewable( non-renewable) energy
d. Shortage of gases and oils
e. Economic hurdles
f. Circular debt
g. Rapid urbanization
h. Power theft
i. Distribution and transmission loses
j. Increase in demand
k. Lack of planning and research
l. Less work on exploration of new hidden energy reserves
m. Lack of accountability

4-Consequences of energy crises
a. Low and sluggish economic growth
b. Poor standards of living
c. Industrial stagnation
d. Transportation problems
e. Trade deficit
d. Inflation
e. Unrest and turmoil.
f. Increase in poverty and unemployment
g. Psychological collapse

5-Solutions/suggestions
a. Adequate management of resources
b. Recovery of circular debt
c. Installation of new power plants
d. Repairing of transmission and distribution units
e. More reliance on renewable resources of energy
f. Construction of new dams
g. Appropriate utilization of Thar coal
h. Exploration of new energy reserves
i. Crackdown on power theft
j. Political consensus
k. Check and balance in industries

6-Conclusion

Introduction
Energy is an engine of social and economic development of a country. No country can get success without it (No nation can touch the height of real success until they have adequate energy resources) . It plays a pivotal role for(in) industrial development coupled with many other processes. Hence, it goes without saying that all those nations are developed which(who) have more energy resources and a(remove it) technology to convert their resources into useful form. Sadly, in Pakistan we are suffering from worse crisis of energy. It has made our lives miserable and impeded the economic growth of country. This unfortunate reality notwithstanding, the energy crisis is completely a curable ailment.Notwithstanding, Energy crisis is completely a curable ailment. We do have all resources to deal with this ongoing challenge which has put the development of country on back burner.(I think this expression does not fit here, you can write it as: which has stagnated socio-ecnomic development. But what is lacking is rational, result-oriented and realistic policy which can enable those at the helm of affairs to manage the existing resources in the best possible manner. Someone in this regard (remove it)has rightly said that 'Pakistan is not a poor country but poorly managed country'( remove it, do not write the word country again). Admittedly, all of this is not a result of mindless decision-making at the top, but a number of other genuine factors are also responsible for this sorry state of affairs. Lack of technology, corruption, unsystematic urbanization, political instability, lack of coordination among institutions are few(some) of those causes which have pushed us in this current unrest.( which have dragged us into miserable state. There is a dire need of realizing that the true prosperity and progress of country lies in having adequate energy (resources).

Originally Posted by sidra naveed

INTRODUCTION
1.what is democracy?
2.Features of democracy
i.Elections are held to elect the representatives
ii.Civil liberties
iii.Ensure rule of law
iv. Independent judiciary
v. Organised opposition party
3 Origin of democracy?

FORMS OF DEMOCRACY

DEMOCRACY versus ANARCHY, MONARCHY,DICTATORSHIP, ARISTOCRACY

WHAT ARE THE PREREQUISITES FOR DEMOCRACY?
i. Peace and Security in the country.
ii.A functioning impartial media
iii. A willing population.
iv. HIgh literacy rate
v. Strong judiciary
DEMOCRACY IN PAKISTAN
i.Fragile democracy
ii.CAUSES OF FAILED DEMOCRACY
i. Military interventions
ii. Corruption and nepotism
iii. Lack of leadership
iv. Illiteracy
v. terrorism and brutality/ turmoil
vi. feudalistic dispensation
vii.Flimsy judiciary
viii.Electoral fraud

FUTURE OF DEMOCRACY IN PAKISTAN
i.awareness among public is incraesing
ii.awakening civil society make bright future of democracy
iii. Thriving electronic media performing effeciently.
iv.International pressure

SUGGESTIONS
i. free media
ii.Abolishment of feudalism
iii.Good Governance
iv.ensure accountability
v. high level of literacy

CONCLUSION


DEMOCRACY
“Democracy” is the most desirable form of Government. Its popularity lies in its very principles that ensure public articulation in decision making. Democracy is government by the people; a form of government in which the sovereign power resides in the people as a whole, and is exercised either directly by them (as in the small republics of antiquity) or by officers elected by them. Liberty, equality and fraternity are the helpmates of modern democratic political creed. Irrespective of religious belief , clime and country democracy has become a watchword and political philosophy in the free world, as opposed to dictatorship and despotic rule.
Scene its inception, the most difficult challenge Pakistan has struggled to meet has been to establish a true democratic system, which could guarantee its survival, stability and development. Unfortunately, the plant of democracy in Pakistan has not taken its roots deep enough to make the country “a durable democratic state”, despite this fact that Pakistan blossomed in the soil of democracy. Pakistan was conceived on the basis of Islam, which is democratic both in letter and spirit. It is indeed very unfortunate and a sad testimony that the plant planted by Quaid-e-Azam and watered by the blood of millions of Muslim men, women and children has not thrived in the country. it can be analyzed that it is not democracy that has failed but the politicians who have failed to run the country on correct democratic principles of equality, justice and fraternity. Moreover, the electorate has been unable to check and control the professional politicians that have changed colour like chamaeleon. it can be said that democracy doesn’t just spring out of thin air, it is a gradual process taking decades sometimes centuries. Our leaders must realize the importance of democracy and must respect the power delegated to them through vote.Democracy can be bolstered by competent leadership who realizes and understands the real cause of failed democracy in Pakistan.If we have to survive as a nation, we all should make collective efforts to nurture the feeble plant of democracy into a fruit and shelter giving plant.


Seniors and other members are requested to check this and also criticize...

Originally Posted by sidra naveed

INTRODUCTION
1.what is democracy?
2.Features of democracy
i.Elections are held to elect the representatives
ii.Civil liberties
iii.Ensure rule of law
iv. Independent judiciary
v. Organised opposition party
3 Origin of democracy? ( Origin should be given right after you Introduction)

FORMS OF DEMOCRACY

DEMOCRACY versus ANARCHY, MONARCHY,DICTATORSHIP, ARISTOCRACY

WHAT ARE THE PREREQUISITES FOR DEMOCRACY?
i. Peace and Security in the country.
ii.A functioning impartial media
iii. A willing population.
iv. HIgh literacy rate
v. Strong judiciary

Originally Posted by Ahmed Faisal

As far as my minute knowledge is concerned, I have observed that your topic is "Democracy" so lets examine your outline and introduction in the light of the Word "Democracy"


up to this point you are on the track... lets go ahead.



Why your focus is only on Pakistan...Your topic is democracy, so you had better discuss democracy around the world and not only Pakistan.

CONCLUSION



keeping in our mind Pakistan's democracy, this is an awesome attempt. However, Always remember that essays are never asked like that. They never ask you to write on Democracy, Terrorism, Women, etc... They always give you Cristal clear dimension. If we talk about Democracy there are so many dimension such as:

Critical analysis of Democracy in Pakistan
Democracy around the world...
Democracy in Islam...
Compare and contrast democracy with Theocracy...
Meaning and purpose of Democracy...

When you would write essay on above mentioned topic, the thesis statement and other contents should be changed. the method, outline, and many others things would be changed. So, when you prepare essay on any topic, try to cover every perspective of that particular topic. Unfortunately, it is a bitter reality that the main reason of failure in the essay is misunderstanding of the essay topic...

Well its my humble request, either change your topic or change your outline...Stay blessed...