That is why i am asking for your help. it is just a draft. it needs a lot of improvement.

jaise mere rough draft me bullets hai I guess they r clear ...bs formal bnae unhe ......and itna matter sufficient hai for judge to understand the matter ..ziada cheze use samajh nh aege ...apne contact numbers and address bh day for clarification of any type .

judge sahab does not know anything about the matter ...esliye use comprehensive form me bilkul eham eham cheze batane hai...and apne frustration ko fully express karna hai.....k we r in great torture

I feel mere wale bullets hee thek rahe ge ...bs language ko formal karna hai ......I feel that shall work

yaar, God helps those who help themselves ....aise to har bnda baith jae k naseeb me hoga to milega ..it's no logic ....do u hv any idea that how much is this job important ...is period k doran bht se to logo ki age nekal gae they r above 28 and can't apply anymore ....kin ki engagements and shadiya ruki hui hai..kisi ki behan kay jahez ka mamla hai ...aise opportunities roz roz to kia decades me bh nh ate ..........punjab me intense competition hai ..sindh me merit ki dhajiya urae jate hai ...balochistan ministers ki state bn gaya hai ..kpk me dehshatgardi ki waja se bleak prospects hai job k ....aise me is job ko chor day aur maaar jaaaeeey .....recently , sindhme civil servants bill pass hua hai ...js k bd non cadre political log cadre posts pe legally appoint hosakege..direct appointments ho paeyy gee....spsc ki dhajiya uradegae .... police me politically motivated shoulder promotions ko validate kiya gaya ...aise SSPs and DIGs kay hotay hue ap apne ghar me bh safe nh ...ye daku to ares k thekay daitehai k full ijazat hai jake looto bs hamay 5 lakh daina .......................In such a graaaaaaaaaaaveeee situation u want us to retreat , to surrender and to back out .......


dear css aspirants .....css ki result 8 months me ate hai tb tk kia hoga ?? ab to log bh haste hai k tumhara nab ka kia hua ???? written me pass bh hogae to age psychological and viva voce hai wh bh pass hogaya to 900 me se sirf 250 allocate hoge....aise me jo opportunity hath me hai use choor k css ke peche bhaage ....hum se hamre jaan mang loo bt dont expect of us to surrenderrrrrrr

dear apka bh theek hai ...just make paragraphs according to idea...u can send it as well ...just bring clarity by discussing one idea in a paragraph...good luck ...

i have collected the material from all the past posts and now going to organize the draft and would dispatch it InshAllah by tomorrow morning , since monday would be a very crucial day for all of us.buet of of luck to all

Brother please write in English, I cannot understand Urdu in English alphabat. I will be grateful.

dear message is conveyed in your letter, just post it. aslam khan sb tang kar rahy hy ap ko.

No, do not send this letter. There are so many grammetical mistakes and little thought process. Edit it.