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Spellings of knowledgeable are wrong as mentioned by Zuhaib.
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@Zuhaib ahmed
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A critical situation isn't necessarily an adverse one. Quote:
Also, no 'he' before gets. It is implied because of the preceding subordinate clause. Quote:
By the way, don't take the '1001' literally. I think what Edison meant was he worked hard and eventually it all paid. The '1001' number is a hyperbole One more thing and I don't know whether this applies to CSS or not, but in writing, it is poor practice to write gender specific pronouns when meaning both genders. Like you used 'he' 9 times, when you could have used 'one'. You should confirm this from a CSP or some CSS teacher.
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Following are some of the words/sentences beautifully knitted together: (These really make nice and rhythmic flow while reading!) "Birds get frozen, flowers get withered, from a pebble of earth to the star of sky all get silenced. It is the time when winter jumps in. Torments, tensions, tragedies, tortures come up when west wind of winter blows." "However, when spring comes it brings gala days; birds fly up, and flowers get bloomed." "Winter snatches green leaves of trees, smashes colours of butterflies, slaughter blooming flowers."
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Man is mortal. He is to die sooner or later. In above sentence, we have used the pronoun 'He' for the noun 'man' which is referring to human beings of both genders including every man and woman. (You may also consult some good english teacher for further clarification on this.)
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An empty vessel makes much noise.
A pitcher which is empty makes loud noise and a pitcher which is full of water makes little noise. One can know by this example that a person who possesses little knowledge, makes loud noise and boasts about bushes. Whereas, the person who has deep knowledge remains silent and talks little. The deeper the ocean the more silent it will be. God likes those people who are gold but call themselves copper coins. Having everything, they spend their lives like a common man. All messengers, prophets, sufis, dervishes and pious people had great knowledge but they never became empty vessels. They spent their lives with simplicity. It is truely said that little knowledge is dangerous. Those people who have little knowledge, they try to be philosophers and scholars. They remain empty inside like drums. When they are hit, they make cracking sound. They do not look before they leap and they get little respect in their surroundings. A person who has deep knowledge speaks little and is respected by everyone. Indeed, brevity is the soul of wit. All the philosophers and scholars talked rarely about their deep knowledge. On account of those who know do not tell and those who tell do not know. A person must not be like empty vessel. He should have deep and profound knowledge because those who speak much about the subject having little knowledge are not liked. |
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Done as directed sir But I haven't found any thing regarding avoidance of well knitted words in Chemguy's post.
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