pehle ye kr k dekhao ap "To err is human, to forgive divine"
phr main kr k dekhaon ga. pattern wohi rakhna jo btaya hai.

Every solution breeds many new problems.

The given adage refers to the fact that when a new solution is found of any problem, it gives rise to so many other problems. For instance, Pakistan is an agricultural country. The basic problem is to increase the production of demanding crops in Pakistan. Then, Pakistani products can compete with foreign products in the international market. For this purpose, the use of mechanized implements in our agricultural sector is quite essential. When agricultural sector is mechanized, the untrained labour force would be thrown out of employment. The basic motive is to increased agricultural production but on the other hand, it will increase unemployment. This is how every solution breeds new problem.

The use of Antibiotics can give some relief from pain of stern diseases. Antibiotics have brought severe diseases under control. It is a great phenomenon of science. Although, use of antibiotics cause many other adverse affects on patients. Cancer patients are often treated by chemo rays, which later reduce the ratio of healthy blood cells in human body. Treatment of cancer can lead to many abnormalities in human body.

The craze of industrialization has created the problem of pollution in the third world countries. Thus, rapid industrialization gives progress to the economy of a country. The industrial centers emit out smoke through chimneys, which pollutes atmosphere. Many diseases have spread out in the industrial cities, which take a heavy toll of human life. Water is contaminated consumption of which adversely affects human stomach. The third world countries do not have the resources to deal with the problem of pollution. The crux of the maxim is that it is a fact every solution can bring many problems.

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Sir mussa plz check my expanison 2 .....

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AoA
The expansion is really good,its simple and lucid.The examples are also relevant,a good effort i must say.....

Baqi Sir Mussa check karain gay

Dear its a nice effort but let me tell you a few things about the written passage.
1) The basic problem is to increase the production of demanding crops in Pakistan. Then, Pakistani products can compete with foreign products in the international market.
its not about quantity of production its about quality of production to compete in international market.
2)The basic motive is to increased agricultural production but on the other hand, it will increase unemployment. This is how every solution breeds new problem.
no need to write here that this is how every solution breeds new problem.
3) Antibiotic is not a phenomenon of science.
4) In the third paragraph you have given an example of Industrialization and problems that breeds out of it .Now look at the sequence of examples which you have given First related to economics then from science then again from economics.If you write the examples of economics together it will make more sense and bring beauty to the paragraph as mechanized agriculture leads to unemployment which forced to more industrialization which leads to pollution etc etc.
5) In the end you have written The crux of the maxim is that it is a fact every solution can bring many problems. Crux of the maxim given by you is actually the maxim not a crux.

well effort. one thing more " Line bhi bari easy thi boss"

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Shabdon mein kya tareef karoon aap ki MUSSAA
Aap shabdon mein kahan bandh payenge.
Kabhi mere aankhon mein jhaank kar dekho,
Hazaron alfaz khud-b-khud bikhar jayenge.

Dear sir ,All the mistakes you had mentioned and point out that i accepted...But last crux wali mistake tu ala he identify ke hai app ne...:P although sequence of examples ka koi rule hai in expansion writing..i meant is it essential k aik dafa economics ke example de hai tu woh dubara nahi de skatey?sir app mujey mushkil topic b de koi tension nahi....hehheheh Line bohot easy thi boss lol.. and thx app ne apna tym laga k mujey in galatiyon k barey main bataya .....

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jb examples do to un main sequence ka kheyal rakho.jaisay history ki aik sath.econimcs ki aik sath politics ki aik sath.jo shahid shakoor ko back apge pe assignment di hai wo kr dekhao

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Shabdon mein kya tareef karoon aap ki MUSSAA
Aap shabdon mein kahan bandh payenge.
Kabhi mere aankhon mein jhaank kar dekho,
Hazaron alfaz khud-b-khud bikhar jayenge.

To err is human, to forgive is divine

The maxim brings out a reality of human nature. Man by nature is a bundle of mistakes. Consciously or unconsciously man makes many lapses in his life. Intentional mistakes are often harmed others adversely. Moreover, certain mistakes are related to instinctive behavior of man.

If you are in a privileged position, you must show humane attitude to your co workers. To be in a commanding position, one needs a big heart to accommodate the vagaries of one’s subordinates. If they make minor mistakes deliberate or otherwise, overlook them. Forgive them for their lapses. Man should show compassion, sympathy and forgiveness to others.

The holy prophet (PBUH) showed a humane behavior and treatment towards Jews and his enemies. An old lady who threw rubbish on his head regularly, when he often passed in front of her house, fell ill. The holy prophet (PBUH) moved into the house to acquire about her health. He was full of compassion. He forgave her on this bad action. The holy prophet (PBUH) taught Muslims to how forgive others on their lapses. To err is Human, to forgive is divine.

A person can kill some people if his speeding car not under control, runs over them. It is not a deliberate action. The person can be tried under law. If the relatives of the deceased forgive them after getting ransom, that is a different matter. God will forgive a person for making an unintentional lapse. Allah’s trait is forgiveness. He is kind and forgiving. The crux of the aphorism is that man is vindictive by nature and make intentionally and unintentionally mistakes but forgiveness is extremely salubrious and superb good deed.

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A hard working Chinese

Diligent efforts of human resource made China a economic giant. There was time when Chinese society was entangled with number of social evils, but the Communists revolutionized the very structure of the Chinese society and inculcated the gene of productiveness in their people. And by dint of laborious work of 60 years, the china is now commanding the economy of the world. For instance, the small houses of industrial province of China turned into full-fledge factories and are doing their best to improve economy of China. Moreover, The Chinese government officials are also putting their maximum efforts to ensure barrier-less business in their mother land. In the words of Thomas Alva Edison " There is no substitute for hard work" and the case of China authenticated it. Thus, Chinese destiny was alter by its industrious human resource.




PLEASE Check MY ENGLISH grammar, expression and every thing. AND Give Suggestions

Dreams for future rely on the work play of today:
Man works hard to achieve success in future. He maintains constant labor and perseverance in order to make his dream true. Undoubtedly, the present time of man is connected with that of his future. If he works hard today, he will touch immense heights in future. For instance, Bill Gates, one of the richest tycoons, was rusticated from his university because of his deplorable performance . So, what he did, he suffered. However, in span of time he flourished his future by constant labor. And he established Microsoft Corporation.
On the contrary, some people are exceptionally fortunate. They do nothing in their present days. But they gain everything they dream. Bayron was such. He awoke one morning and found himself famous. But it happens rarely. In usual cases, people’s work done today, blesses sweet fruit tomorrow. Indeed, while working tenaciously to achieve future dream, man faces many stumbling blocks on the way to his success. No doubt, one who faces those hurdles bravely, get his dream true. On the other hand, man who does not sustain pressure of problems, while struggling for his aim, definitely fails to beat his goal. In some cases, such people, who do not dare to fight for their dream, faces sever miseries and mental agony.
Summing up, what man dreams for future is related to his actions. If he works hard and commits to get his dream true in future, he will, without any shadow of doubt, touch the sky. However, if he does not adopt constant labor and perseverance today, he will confront hardships and will fail to achieve his objective. Thus, it becomes clear that dreams for future rely on the work play of today.

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Baroz-e-Hashar main be-khof ghuss jaonga Jannat mien,
Wahin se aye thay Adam woh meray baap Ka ghar hai
(Allam Iqbal)